[G12] Spectroscopy Working Group Presentation

[mpaolone at jlab.org]

Hey Diane,

It looks very nice.  Here are a few suggestions:

The "Initial Cuts" slide could benefit from maybe a plot or two; in
general a slide that has an image is usually more engaging than a slide
that is all text.  I'm sure people wouldn't mind seeing how the g12
target/z-vertex or vertex-timing looks with/with-out your cuts.  You might
not have room for this, though.

The "2 Gamma Data Selection" slide 10 has a little space.  For clarity,
you might want to show this equation as much as you can with variables,
and then define the variables below.  Use M_eta where you can, and use 'a'
and 'b' instead of 0.13 and 0.08, and then call them the semimajor and
semiminor elliptical axes in the definition below.  I think that would
help viewers understand what's going on in this slide more quickly.

On Slide 18 I'd cut up and paste the equations so they are multi-lined and
stacked under their histogram, and not underneath a neighboring one.

Is there supposed to be a "2 Gamma" in the right hand corner of slides 14,
15, 17, 18 , and 19?  Are they to differentiate between the 1 Gamma data
selection?  If so, I would just add a line after the 1 gamma data
selection slide that says the rest of the presentation shows data from the
2 gamma data selection only.

Hope that helps,

-Michael


> Hi Guys,
>
> http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/g12/talks/june18-p2pi.pdf
>
> Here is my presentation, please let me know if there are any changes that
> need to be made.
>
>
> -- Diane
>
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