[G12] DNP presentation

[Paul Eugenio]

Hi Diane,

Over all, I like the slides, but they need to be cleaned up.  Below are several comments and concerns.    Please post you latest slide for tomorrow's for our regular meeting.


Paul



*** All 1D histograms should have axis lables, i.e. "Events per 0.01 GeV .."  Be consistent.  Don't just stick this somewhere on the plot.
*** Make sure all plot labels and titles are readable.

slide 2:  
	* your glueball sketch looks like a ball of quarks.  Why not use a twisted dotted red line to represent the excited glue.

slide 4 & 6:
	* We need a g12 detector lay-out with events.  Can we get an updated event display with target pulled back?  
	* 4pi solid angle is relative... In the Jackson frame, it is no where near 4 pi.

slide 10: 
	* no title on slide
	* "with in" to "within"
	* this slide could be clearer

slide 11:
	* no title
	* show eta selection on plot
	* why not show Mass[p pi+] vs MM[p pi_ pi-] with selection regions?

slide 11B:
	* slide with discussion on Mass[eta pi-]

slide 12:
	* "Angular Moments"
	* you may want to describe angular moments better, in particular to their connections to partial waves
	* "raw moments" should be "accepted moments"  Note: these are not acceptance corrected moments
	* (do you know what H(21) looks like for accepted phase space MC?)
	
slide 14:
	* "Very Preliminary PWA" 
 // To be honest, this is too preliminary to show to the world....




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Prof. Paul Eugenio
Florida State University
Department of Physics
Tallahassee, Florida,  USA 32306

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eugenio at fsu.edu



On Oct 25, 2010, at 10:10 AM, Diane Schott wrote:

> Good morning!
> 
> I am presenting at the meeting DNP next week on Nov 5th. Could you please
> take a look at my presentation and send me any comments or suggestions you
> may have.
> 
> http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/g12/talks/dnp10-dschott.pdf
> 
> -- Diane
> 
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