[G12] Hadron 2015 Abstract

[John Price]

Hi Will:

Looks good.  Just two things:

1. Your title has too many nouns in it.  I would hyphenate
"baryon-antibaryon" there and in the first sentence of the abstract.
Otherwise it looks like you are looking at two different processes: one
in which "baryons" are photoproduced, and one in which "antibaryons" are
photoproduced.  The hyphenation makes it clear that you are
photoproducing both in a single process.

2. I would move your last sentence (about the antineutron measurement
being the first of its kind) to the second sentence; that makes it "pop"
a bit more.  Perhaps change the wording a bit to (after the first
sentence) "The reaction $\gamma p\to pp\pi^-\overline{n}$ represents the
first observation of antineutrons in a photoproduction process."

John

On Fri, 2015-05-29 at 12:14 -0400, Will Phelps wrote:
> Hey guys,
> Here is the abstract I would like to submit to Hadron 2015.
> https://userweb.jlab.org/~wphelps/temp/hadron_2015.pdf
> -Will
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