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<p>Greetings Ken,</p>
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<p>Here are some of my suggestions.</p>
<p>Abstract;</p>
<p>Second sentence: However, there exists no ... -> However, <b>currently</b>
there exists no...</p>
<p>Last sentence: is associated with t channel ...->is associated
with <b>a</b> t channel production mechanism. OR is associated
with t channel production mechanism<b>s</b>.</p>
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<p>Introduction;</p>
<p>Second paragraph: Its mentions that of all the f0, only two can
belong to the meson scalar nonet. For us laymen, can you add which
two you are referring to?</p>
<p>Third paragraph: 3rd sentence starts out as Models based..... and
then this sentence proceeds 7 lines. Can this sentence be broken
into 2 or 3?</p>
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<p>Experimental Setup;</p>
<p>Maybe instead of "struck a thin gold foil..."-> "struck gold
foil of 10^-4 radiation lengths..."</p>
<p>... initial energy with a photon energy resolution of a few MeV.
-> initial energy with a photon energy resolution < 7.6 MeV
(I think the largest paddle overlap lead to this, but Eugene would
know for sure).</p>
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<p>Timing Cut;</p>
<p>Near the bottom of page 2, its written 'good', in single quotes.
I think it should be double quotes "good". Unless you are using
British English?</p>
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<p>Figure 3 caption;</p>
<p>I am always confused on whether its 2-pion or two-pion. However,
if either are adequate, then maybe stick with your paper
convention... two-pion.</p>
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<p>Im not sure what the target journal is, but the figure axis
titles and fonts are different throughtout the paper. Moreover, I
find Figure 4's axis a bit of an eye strain.</p>
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<p>Otherwise, I think it well written.</p>
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<p>LLAP<br>
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Nuclear Physics Institute and Juelich Center for Hadron Physics
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 04/05/2017 22:44, Hicks, Kenneth
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<div class="PlainText">I have posted on the g12 wiki a
link to the paper that Shloka and I wrote on the search
for scalar mesons (KsKs p final state). Please send me
your comments by Monday morning. I'm going to request
an Ad Hoc committee from Jerry Gilfoyle and so I'd like
to hear and suggestions/comments on this paper without
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<div class="PlainText">Here's a direct link if you prefer:</div>
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<div class="PlainText">Best regards,</div>
<div class="PlainText">Ken</div>
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