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<div class="">The 3 pi paper is moving to a Collaboration-wide review. The current version is located on the ad-hoc review site prepared in draft mode with numbered lines (See link below). While the majority of the changes have been editorial in nature, we
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<div class="">We are currently preparing the final draft for Collaboration-wide review. We will be taking into account comments received from Carlos, Susan and any that we have missed from Ken. We welcome any additional input. </div>
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<div class="">Direct paper link:</div>
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<div class="">Ad-hoc review site:</div>
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<div class="">yours very truly,</div>
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</b></span><span style="font-family: -webkit-system-font, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, sans-serif;" class="">Barry Ritchie <<a href="mailto:Barry.Ritchie@asu.edu" class="">Barry.Ritchie@asu.edu</a>>, Alessandra Filippi <<a href="mailto:filippi@to.infn.it" class="">filippi@to.infn.it</a>>,
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Dear All,
<div class="">First of all, I would like to thank very much the ad-hoc committee for the accurate and efficient review of this paper.</div>
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<div class="">Paul, as soon as the final draft of the paper, with the latest corrections by the review committee, will be uploaded on the review web page, I will start the Collaboration-wide review.</div>
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<div class="">On 15 Aug 2019, at 01:11, Paul Eugenio <<a href="mailto:peugenio@fsu.edu" class="">peugenio@fsu.edu</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">We will look more into editing the graphs to improve B/W readability. </div>
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<div class="">On Aug 14, 2019, at 1:00 PM, Barry Ritchie <<a href="mailto:Barry.Ritchie@asu.edu" class="">Barry.Ritchie@asu.edu</a>> wrote:</div>
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<span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">The ad hoc committee has reviewed the response to our previous comments.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">We find the response is satisfactory, though we note a few corrections and comments below. We fully understand the issue with not being able to edit the figures. However, we would suggest that the authors note
that, in general, curves and points in a figure always should be distinguishable in black-and-white to ensure all readers will be able to interpret the figure; color can then be added, if desired.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">The committee believes that the paper is ready for the next stage of review.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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