<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div>Some suggestions for changes:</div><div><br></div><div>1) "QCD-based and inspired models" -> "Constituent quark models and Lattice QCD" (although what you have is probably OK). </div><div><br></div>2) "There are host" -> "There are a host" (also, this sentence needs to be tied into the rest of it better: why do we care about polarization observables? because they provide extra constraints/handles on extracting the N* resonances)<div><br></div><div>3) "give measure of" -> "give a measure of"</div><div><br></div><div>4) "Among these observables ... ": I don't think this sentence is necessary. </div><div><br></div><div>5) "In this paper" -> "In this talk"</div><div><br></div><div>6) "excess of cross section' -> "increase in the cross section." I guess we'll learn more about what you mean with this sentence when you show your results next week. </div><div><br></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal 'Times New Roman'; "><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Helvetica" size="3">7) "We regard this work ...": I don't think this sentence is necessary. </font></div></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal 'Times New Roman'; "><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Helvetica" size="3"><br></font></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal 'Times New Roman'; "><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Helvetica" size="3">8) 2007 -> 2006 (The vast majority of g13a was in 2006; g13b was in 2007). </font></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal 'Times New Roman'; "><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Helvetica" size="3"><br></font></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal 'Times New Roman'; "><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; "> - Paul</span></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal 'Times New Roman'; "><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Helvetica" size="3"><br></font></div><div><div><div>On Jan 24, 2013, at 12:11 PM, <a href="mailto:ctaylor@jlab.org">ctaylor@jlab.org</a> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div>Everyone,<br><br>I was hoping to present at NSTAR. If possible I would like to go over my<br>results with the group Tuesday next week. I have attached my abstract to<br>this message for comments.<br><br>-Charles<span><Diff_Xsection-CTaylor-1.pdf></span>_______________________________________________<br>g13 mailing list<br><a href="mailto:g13@jlab.org">g13@jlab.org</a><br>https://mailman.jlab.org/mailman/listinfo/g13</div></blockquote></div><br></div></body></html>