[G14_run] Tsuneo Kageya's draft abstract for Nstar2013

[Franz Klein]

Tsuneo,
this is a nice abstract! A few minor suggestions:
6th sentence: "To address the latter ..." skip article "the" in front of 
CLAS
7th sentence: "The combination of small dilution and low Z of this 
target ..." I am not sure what's best but "with" seems to be the wrong 
preposition.

Good luck,
Franz

On 01/24/2013 11:32 AM, Tsuneo Kageya wrote:
> Dear g14 and CLAS Hadron Spectroscopy group,
>
>   I am planning to attend NSTAR2013 and to have a contributed talk about preliminary
> results from g14 experiments; attaching a draft abstract on this email.
> Comments and suggestions are welcome !    If you give me them, please consider the
> deadline of the abstract which is Jan. 30th.  Thank you.
>
>   I would like to appreciate that Andy Sandorfi checked and modified it a lot.
>
>           Regards, Tsuneo Kageya.
>
>
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