[G14_run] Tsuneo's draft slides for Spin2016 - comments

[Dr. A.M. Sandorfi]

Tsuneo,

This really won't do. Slides 8 - 12 discuss your analysis. The next slide
shows a BDT result, without every telling the audience what a BDT is. Slide
14 then goes back to your analysis. Slide 15 and on lists the three
different analyses without ever describing anything about the BDT or KinFit
processes. This makes for a really confusing talk. You need to create one or
two slides for each analysis method that describes in very general terms
what is involved in that method. (Also reference Dao's thesis and Peng's
thesis somewhere.)

A few comments on specific slides:
#1: change the last line to : (on behalf of the g14 Analysis Team and the
CLAS Collaboration)

#2: remove the "full set of 16" (put a white box over it). Sadly, given the
g14 statistics, that goal of the experiment will never be reached.

#5: that really looks sloppy! Cover the edges of the grey rectangle so that
it at least has horizontal and vertical edges.

#9: completely unnecessary.

# 14: essentially a better looking repeat of page 5. Pick one.

Andy




On 9/20/16, 12:08 PM, "Tsuneo Kageya" <kageya at jlab.org> wrote:

> Dear,
> 
>  I am attaching a pdf file for my talk on Spin2016 (my talk will be
> on Tues. the next week).   My talk has 15 minutes long and 5 min. of
> discussion time. 
> 
>  For the systematic error table, the numbers are slightly different
> from those in the analysis note; I am trying to discuss them
> with Franz.
> 
>  Any comments and suggestions are welcome.
> 
>     Regards, Tsuneo Kageya.
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