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Tsuneo,<br>
this is a nice abstract! A few minor suggestions: <br>
6th sentence: "To address the latter ..." skip article "the" in
front of CLAS<br>
7th sentence: "The combination of small dilution and low Z of this
target ..." I am not sure what's best but "with" seems to be the
wrong preposition.<br>
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Good luck,<br>
Franz<br>
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On 01/24/2013 11:32 AM, Tsuneo Kageya wrote:
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<pre wrap="">Dear g14 and CLAS Hadron Spectroscopy group,
I am planning to attend NSTAR2013 and to have a contributed talk about preliminary
results from g14 experiments; attaching a draft abstract on this email.
Comments and suggestions are welcome ! If you give me them, please consider the
deadline of the abstract which is Jan. 30th. Thank you.
I would like to appreciate that Andy Sandorfi checked and modified it a lot.
Regards, Tsuneo Kageya.</pre>
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