<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Dear Haiyun,<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I read through your nice draft for the N* proceedings article. Actually, I read through the version that Andy marked up. I think you should adopt his recommendations. Here are just a few additional comments:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">page 2 bottom: where you list the 4 beam and target conditions it might good to make an itemized list with separate lines. I found it a bit confusing to read them all “in line”.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Fig 1 caption: replace “VS” with either “vs.’ or “versus”</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Fig 2 and Fig 3: I think you have these in reverse order compared to the order in which they are cited in the text. In fact, Figure 3 ought to come first.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">SAID curves: You make use of results from SAID for your comparisons, but I did not see any specific reference to which version of SAID you are using. People like Igor S. are sensitive to that. Can you add a reference to the specific source of the curves you are showing?</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Results graphs: I am a fan of having a thin horizontal line that marks zero asymmetry on all the graphs. For the G graphs in particular, I would recommend that, since it would let the reader see directly the answer to natural questions like “Is G compatible with zero over the entire kinematic range?” </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">Reinhard</div><div class=""><br class=""><div apple-content-edited="true" class="">
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<br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Mar 27, 2018, at 12:45 AM, <a href="mailto:hlu@jlab.org" class="">hlu@jlab.org</a> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class="">Dear HDIcer,<br class=""><br class="">I put the draft of nstar2017 proceeding at<br class=""><a href="https://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/g14/HLu/publication/nstar2017.pdf" class="">https://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/g14/HLu/publication/nstar2017.pdf</a>.<br class="">Could you please read and give me some feedback.<br class=""><br class="">CLAS password is needed to access the document, NOT your personal jlab<br class="">account.<br class=""><br class="">Thank you,<br class="">Haiyun<br class=""><br class="">_______________________________________________<br class="">G14_run mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:G14_run@jlab.org" class="">G14_run@jlab.org</a><br class="">https://mailman.jlab.org/mailman/listinfo/g14_run<br class=""></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></body></html>