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    <p>Dear All,</p>
    <p>I may not be able to attend today g14 meeting because of an
      official local event I cannot avoid. I have started to read the
      final version of the paper.</p>
    <p>I have noted some minor suggested  corrections in the following.</p>
    <p>Best regards</p>
    <p>Annalisa</p>
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    <p>line 111 - requires requires -> requires</p>
    <p>line 148 - We assume -> We assume,</p>
    <p>line 149 - experience -> experience,</p>
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      with parameter constraints largely fixed (or imposed, or taken...)
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      three conjunctions and adverbs, difficult to read</p>
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      <div class="">Wednesday the 25th was the end of the collaboration
        review period for the K0Y0 paper.    I have already completed
        revisions of the paper and created a complete list of responses
        to all the points that were raised by various people.   Attached
        to this message are two documents:  the revised draft paper, and
        the response “memo” that will go to all the people who made
        comments.   We could go over these two documents tomorrow as
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                          Reinhard Schumacher         Department of
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                          Carnegie Mellon University, Pittsburgh, PA
                          15213, U.S.A.<br class="">
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Prof. Annalisa D'Angelo
Dip. Fisica, Universita' di Roma "Tor Vergata"
INFN Sezione di Roma Tor Vergata, Rome Italy
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:email:annalisa.dangelo@roma2.infn.it">email:annalisa.dangelo@roma2.infn.it</a> 
Jefferson Laboratory, Newport News, VA USA
Email: <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:annalisa@jlab.org">annalisa@jlab.org</a>
Tel: + 39 06 72594562
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