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Toby,<br>
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It is in good shape.<br>
Minor comments:<br>
1) Will be good to have "For the JLab g2p (E08-027) collaboration",
either at the author line,<br>
or as a footnote.<br>
2) 7th line, "the second proton structure function"<br>
--> "the second proton spin structure function"<br>
3) 10th line, add a space between "0.2" and "GeV2"<br>
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Best regards.<br>
<br>
Jian-ping<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 1/7/16 4:12 PM, Toby Badman wrote:<br>
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<div dir="ltr">Hi all,
<div>Attached is my abstract for the APS april meeting. The
deadline for submission is tomorrow evening, but any last
minute feedback would be much appreciated!</div>
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<div>Thanks,</div>
<div>Toby</div>
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