<html><body>Chuck,<div><br></div><div>please add 'on behalf of the CLAS Collaboration' to your name below the title. Some further minor points:</div><div><br></div><div>* Use \vec{\gamma} in the title and in other places for the vector sign above the photon.</div><div><br></div><div>* Page 2 in EXPERIMENT: LH2 -> the 2 should be an index</div><div><br></div><div>* In the same paragraph, avoid the line break for Hall B and 30 TB.</div><div><br></div><div>* In ANALYSIS: 1) center-of-mass should be c.m. instead of just cm</div><div> 2) the data 'are' binned</div><div><br></div><div>* Caption of Fig. 1: Be consistent and use c.m. NOT suddenly the capitalized CM.</div><div><br></div><div>* In Eqn. 1 and 3, be consistent and use also $k$ instead of $E_\gamma$.</div><div><br></div><div>Best wishes</div><div><br></div><div> Volker</div><div><br></div><div> <br><div><div>On Jul 30, 2011, at 3:16 PM, Charles Hanretty wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite">Dear all,<br> An updated version of my proceedings (this time with the correct format) can be found at/in:<br><br>/u/site/www/html/Hall-B/secure/hadron/proceedings/2011/Hanretty_NSTAR2011_Proc6x9.pdf<br><br>-and-<br><br> <a href="http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/hadron/proceedings/2011/Hanretty_NSTAR2011_Proc6x9.pdf">http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/hadron/proceedings/2011/Hanretty_NSTAR2011_Proc6x9.pdf</a><br><br>Your comments are welcome. <br clear="all"> <br>-- <br>Cheers,<br>Charles Hanretty<br><br> _______________________________________________<br>G8b_run mailing list<br><a href="mailto:G8b_run@jlab.org">G8b_run@jlab.org</a><br>https://mailman.jlab.org/mailman/listinfo/g8b_run<br></blockquote></div><br></div></body></html>