[Gdh_lowq2] Manuscript for Chiral Dynamics 09

[Alexandre Deur]

Hello Sarah,

Here are my comments:

Nice write-up!

Abstract, line 2. sum rule -> sum (we don't measure a sum rule)

In page 2 1st paragrapher. You're refering to the low Q2 region as <1-2 
GeV2. Then you said ChPT can be used in this region. You should point out 
that ChPT can be used only in a fraction of this region (<maybe a few 
tenth of GeV2).

3rd paragrapher 1st line: photon limit -> photon point

In Eq. 1.2 I would replace the non equal by greater or equal, since 1.2 is 
still valid at Q2=0

Same paragrapher: ref to the Bj sum rule missing.

1st line last paragrapher. sum rule -> sum

Page 3:

In Eq. 1.3, if you put (x,Q2) for the SSF, you should do it too for the 
Xsections. So I would just drop them from the Eq.

Next paragrapher. line 1 sum rule -> sum.

next-to-last line: Experiment -> experiment

Page 4
In the middle paragrapher:
Hall B CLAS -> CLAS, the large solid angle spectrometer of Hall B.

uniform detection efficiency -> uniform detection efficiency at forward 
angles

That's all I have.

Best regards,

Alexandre


On Mon, 28 Sep 2009, Sarah Phillips wrote:

> Dear Colleagues,
>
> 	I have placed my draft manuscript for the proceedings for Chiral
> Dynamics 2009 here:
>
> http://www.jlab.org/~sarahp/EG4/CD09_proceedings.pdf
>
> The page limit is 9 pages.  I am sorry for the short notice (I'm behind as
> always!), but I would appreciate any comments and suggestions you have
> soon, as the deadline for submission is this Wednesday (September 30th).
> Thanks!
>
> 				With Regards,
>
> 					Sarah
>
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