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Dear Hall C collaborators,</div>
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I would like to thank everyone for their thoughtful feedback and comments to this paper. Attached please find the second draft, here is a summary of the larger changes:</div>
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The length of this paper is currently at the 4 page PRL limit, therefore we were unable to address all the requests to include more details of the analysis, uncertainty calculations, etc. However many of these answers can be found in the cited PhD theses.</div>
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Please send any additional comments on this draft by Sept. 10th. Additionally if you haven't done so already, please send me an email agreeing to be on the author list. </div>
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Regards,</div>
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William Henry for the E12-10-002 experiment</div>
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, June 3, 2024 12:15 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Hallc_running@jlab.org <hallc_running@jlab.org>; hallc@jlab.org <hallc@jlab.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Draft PRL on the deuteron to proton structure function ratio</span>
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Dear Hall C collaborators,</div>
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Please find attached our draft paper on the deuteron to proton structure function ratio, which has been prepared for submission to PRL. These data were taken during the F2 (E12-10-002) and EMC experiment (E12-10-007) run period in 2018 as part of the group
of 12 GeV commissioning experiments in Hall C.</div>
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Please send your comments on this draft by June 14th. Even if you have no comments on the paper, please send an email indicating that you agree to be an author. Also, please pass this draft along to anyone in your group who may not be on the "hallc" or "hallc_running"
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