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<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">Elton, for some reason, I was not permitted to send this set of suggestions to Mariana through the halld-physics exploder. Could you please forward? ---BGR<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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</span><b class=""><span style="font-family: "Book Antiqua", serif; color: blue;" class="">Professor Barry G. Ritchie<br class="">
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<b class="">From:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Barry Ritchie<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class="">
<b class="">Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Tuesday, January 05, 2021 3:08 PM<br class="">
<b class="">To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Mariana Khachatryan <<a href="mailto:marianak@jlab.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline;" class="">marianak@jlab.org</a>>;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:halld-physics@jlab.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline;" class="">halld-physics@jlab.org</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Physics
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<b class="">Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>RE: Abstract for APS April meeting<o:p class=""></o:p></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">Mariana, you have an unneeded comma after Hall D in the first sentence. I would</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>suggest</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>the
second and third sentences read:<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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“GlueX uses a multi-GeV linearly-polarized real photon beam with a solenoid-based large-acceptance detector. The facility completed the initial phase of data taking in 2018 and has many analysis efforts well underway.”<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class=""><o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">I would change “…</span>analysis efforts towards the search…<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">”
to simply “…<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span>searches …<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">”.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">Since you do not use the abbreviation PWA after introducing the abbreviation, I would eliminate the abbreviation altogether. I also would not start a new
paragraph with the final sentence, but simply tack it on to the remainder of the abstract.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">Thank you for acknowledging your sponsor(s). A number of the abstracts seem to be lacking that.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; color: rgb(50, 62, 79);" class="">---BGR<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div>
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<b class="">From:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Halld-physics <<a href="mailto:halld-physics-bounces@jlab.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline;" class="">halld-physics-bounces@jlab.org</a>><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b class="">On
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<b class="">Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Tuesday, January 05, 2021 1:26 PM<br class="">
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<b class="">Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>[Halld-physics] Abstract for APS April meeting<o:p class=""></o:p></div>
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Dear all,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><o:p class=""></o:p></div>
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please take a look at the abstract of my invited talk at APS April meeting on “Photoproduction of hadrons with the GlueX experiment”, <o:p class=""></o:p></div>
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and let me know about your comments.<o:p class=""></o:p></div>
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The abstract can be found here:<o:p class=""></o:p></div>
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