[Halld-pid-upgrade] RICH2016 proceedings

[Maria Patsyuk]

Hi Justin,

thank you for the comments.
The updated version can be found here:

GlueX-doc-3098, version 13.

Best regards,
Maria

On Oct 11, 2016, at 1:28 PM, Justin Stevens <jrsteven at jlab.org<mailto:jrsteven at jlab.org>> wrote:

Hi Maria,

Some comments on your nice draft:

Abstract: remove "but modified to reduce cost while maintaining the physics performance", the cost is not really relevant to the outsider reading this paper.
remove space in "R& D"
replace "... expected to be built and installed by mid 2017..." with "... planned to be built and installed in 2017..."

p1, line 6: add "an" between "with energy"

p2, line 45: replace "...in the momentum range from 2 up to 4 GeV/c." with "...for momenta less up to 4 GeV/c."
p2, line 59: replace "... , which require" with "requiring"
p2, line 77: tree -> three
p2, line 78: add "5 GeV/c" before charged pions, and remove "with momentum of 5 GeV/c"
p2, line 79: showh -> shown

Figure 3:  Can you add some labels so it's easier to see what the different components are?

p3, line 112: Add "A" before LUT
p3, line 144: Add "a" before special
p3, line 145: was -> has been

References: remove all "doi:10...." numbers from the references.

Also, please post your draft on the GlueX DocDB so it will be maintained in the future.

-Justin

On Oct 7, 2016, at 4:51 PM, Maria Patsyuk wrote:

Dear all,

please find a draft of the proceedings for the RICH2016 here:

https://gluexdirc.mit.edu/sites/default/files/images/RICH2016_MPatsyuk1.pdf

The requirements are:
<= 4 pages, the deadline is November 1.

Best regards,
Maria

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