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<div class="">the updated proceedings draft incorporating some comments from Justin and Jochen can be found here:</div>
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<div class="">On Oct 11, 2016, at 2:32 PM, Maria Patsyuk <<a href="mailto:mpatsyuk@mit.edu" class="">mpatsyuk@mit.edu</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">On Oct 11, 2016, at 2:30 PM, Maria Patsyuk <<a href="mailto:mpatsyuk@mit.edu" class="">mpatsyuk@mit.edu</a>> wrote:</div>
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Hi Justin,
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<div class="">thank you for the comments.</div>
<div class="">The updated version can be found here:</div>
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Some comments on your nice draft:<br class="">
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Abstract: remove "but modified to reduce cost while maintaining the physics performance", the cost is not really relevant to the outsider reading this paper.<br class="">
<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"></span>remove space in "R& D"<br class="">
<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"></span>replace "... expected to be built and installed by mid 2017..." with "... planned to be built and installed in 2017..."<br class="">
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p1, line 6: add "an" between "with energy"<br class="">
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p2, line 45: replace "...in the momentum range from 2 up to 4 GeV/c." with "...for momenta less up to 4 GeV/c."<br class="">
p2, line 59: replace "... , which require" with "requiring"<br class="">
p2, line 77: tree -> three<br class="">
p2, line 78: add "5 GeV/c" before charged pions, and remove "with momentum of 5 GeV/c"<br class="">
p2, line 79: showh -> shown<br class="">
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Figure 3: Can you add some labels so it's easier to see what the different components are?<br class="">
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p3, line 112: Add "A" before LUT<br class="">
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References: remove all "doi:10...." numbers from the references.<br class="">
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please find a draft of the proceedings for the RICH2016 here:<br class="">
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<a href="https://gluexdirc.mit.edu/sites/default/files/images/RICH2016_MPatsyuk1.pdf" class="">https://gluexdirc.mit.edu/sites/default/files/images/RICH2016_MPatsyuk1.pdf</a><br class="">
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<= 4 pages, the deadline is November 1.<br class="">
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