[Halld-tracking-hw] ADC125 paper

[Fernando J. Barbosa]

Hi Gerard,

The paper looks good. I have a few suggestions:

1. Page 1, right column, 3rd paragraph - Should mention the double 
terminated line is also shielded.
2. Page 2 - Re-number figures 1 and 2 and corresponding text.
3. Page 2, left column, 1st paragraph - Should clarify that the cost of 
the module is lower with 12-bit parts, even though the cost of the PCB 
is the same for either the 12-bit or 14-bit parts.
4. Page 2, right column, 1st paragraph, lines 4, 5 - cables appears twice.
5. Page 2, right column, 2nd paragraph, line 3 - ... pipeline ADC chip 
with full ...
6. May want to have residual as residual (#LSB) or residual (# ADC units).

Thanks and best regards,
Fernando




Gerard Visser wrote:
> Hi,
> 	I posted the 'conference record' paper (draft) to GlueX-doc-1638-v1. I would 
> appreciate any comments or feedback as soon as feasible. I need to submit the 
> paper by Nov. 12th. (A day on which I unfortunately have an all-day meeting at 
> BNL.) The paper is not for a reviewed journal simply the conference record.
> 	The paper is in reasonable shape, conveys basically the same material I had on 
> the poster. I don't have time to make it more polished, but absolutely if there 
> is anything stated incorrectly I would hope to change that, and if there are any 
> suggestions for improvement in wording that I can put in relatively quickly I'll 
> take those too.
> 	Sincerely,
>
> 		Gerard
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