<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:large"><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US">what is the target journal?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US"><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US">Please add
line numbers to the PDF</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US">Abstract: </span><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:9pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">GlueX detector</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:9pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Wingdings"></span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:9pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"> GlueX detector at Jefferson laboratory</span></i><span lang="EN-US"></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Page 1: Fraction x. - x is not
defined</span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"> </span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">I think the introduction is not focus I would say it clear cut short:</span></i></p>
<p class="gmail-MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0cm 36pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">1.<span style="font-style:normal;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-variant-alternates:normal;font-kerning:auto;font-feature-settings:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:"Times New Roman"">
</span></span></i><span dir="LTR"></span><span lang="EN-US">Why j/psi subthreshold production in nuclei is
important</span></p>
<p class="gmail-MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0cm 36pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">2.<span style="font-style:normal;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-variant-alternates:normal;font-kerning:auto;font-feature-settings:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:"Times New Roman"">
</span></span></i><span dir="LTR"></span><span lang="EN-US">Attempt to measure such production failed (ref)</span></p>
<p class="gmail-MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt 36pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">3.<span style="font-style:normal;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;font-variant-alternates:normal;font-kerning:auto;font-feature-settings:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:"Times New Roman"">
</span></span></i><span dir="LTR"></span><span lang="EN-US">Here we reporit for the first time.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US">Experiment-
I would put a plot of Gluex showing the relevant
subsystems </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US"> mentioned. maybe the reaction also </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">B(J/ψ → e</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">+</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">e</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">−</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">) ≈ 5.97°æ0.03% is the branching fraction -is it clear
that for subthreshold there is the</span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Same BR as for free j psi?</span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Fig 2: I would mark the threshold </span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Fig3: there are much less fluctuations in the data compare to the large uncertainties shown</span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><br></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">best regards</span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 8pt;line-height:115%;font-size:12pt;font-family:Aptos,sans-serif"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"> eli</span></i></p></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Tue, Jun 25, 2024 at 12:23 AM Jackson Reeves Pybus via halld_src <<a href="mailto:halld_src@jlab.org">halld_src@jlab.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div><div>Hello SRC-CT group members.<div><br></div><div>As discussed in this morning’s meeting, given the wrap-up of the internal J/ψ analysis review, I am emailing to distribute the draft of the manuscript “First Measurement of Near- and Sub-Threshold J/ψ Photoproduction off Nuclei” (along with the supplemental material for the paper). Comments and questions regarding the analysis and the manuscript are appreciated and should be sent to me at (<a href="mailto:jrpybus@mit.edu" target="_blank">jrpybus@mit.edu</a>).</div><div><br></div><div>In addition, here is the google-form signup link for authorship to the paper, so please sign up now to be included as an author on the final paper:</div><div><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_forms_d_e_1FAIpQLScx4u2554oJ7Go6Qgg9-5FgWqivcNkVfMhSAE2AGeUp-2DT-5FO7xVw_viewform-3Fusp-3Dsf-5Flink&d=DwMFaQ&c=CJqEzB1piLOyyvZjb8YUQw&r=66Sb4pp0d4diwFuNQ_jTiKyZDsB_FG2X3Hlmk9_wuSY&m=t7bKt1obJjkhSJarOXo5VLswR4X7a8ZA6iap8pO25FoTzEhY_Jrc5oHi_DquxyHF&s=XOYkdW2VID4la-yANprizLko89qf6s6Fhi55g9kiEfw&e=" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScx4u2554oJ7Go6Qgg9_gWqivcNkVfMhSAE2AGeUp-T_O7xVw/viewform?usp=sf_link</a></div><div><br></div><div>Comments on this draft would be appreciated by the end of this week, Friday, June 29.</div><div><br></div><div>Best regards,</div><div>Jackson Pybus</div><div><br></div><div></div></div></div><div><div><div></div></div></div><div><div><div></div></div><div><div></div></div></div>_______________________________________________<br>
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