[Hps] Lepton-Photon Poster

[Graf, Norman A.]

Hello Omar,
This looks good and covers the relevant topics well.
Just a few comments after a quick read:

Abstract:
  fix "alpha/alpha ~ 10^-5..."
I prefer e+e-, mu+mu- (which you also use later)
Intro:
last sentence first paragraph "could provide an explanation FOR the anomaly"
2nd sentence, para 3 "This layout requires that the intense electron beam passes through..."
last sentence, para 3 "The HPS Test Run detector was used to demonstrate that..."

Test Run Detector
1st sentence "The Heavy Photon Search Test Run detector was designed to demonstrate..."
                           " and occupancies encouNtered during"
2nd sentence "in vacuUM and aN electromagnetic"

last sentence, para 2 "the SVT used 20 sensors"

Dedicated Run
Point 1:  fix "10^{-4} X_0"
Point 3:  1.6%, 0.45% and 0.18% "of a radiation length"
Point 4: "Backgrounds coming from upstream of the gold radiator were also measured..."

SVT Performance:
Point 3 "was measured to be " WHAT?
Point 5 "<300" WHAT?
Axis labels could be larger

Tracker Performance:
  PerfoRmance
Point 1 :  e^+e^- with track MOMENTUM greater...

Ecal and Trigger Performance

Point 2 "Ecal gain calibration performed using E/p from matche tracks"
Point 3 replace tilde with \simeq

Multiple Coulomb Scattering

move Point 3 to Point 2
Combine current Point 2 with the last two points
After typing this I realize it might be a bit cryptic. Feel free to contact
me if you need any clarification.
Norman


From: hps-bounces at jlab.org [mailto:hps-bounces at jlab.org] On Behalf Of Omar Moreno
Sent: Wednesday, June 19, 2013 4:34 PM
To: HPS
Subject: [Hps] Lepton-Photon Poster

Hello Everyone,

You will find a very preliminary draft of the poster I will present at lepton-photon here:

http://slac.stanford.edu/~omoreno/lepton_photon_poster.png

I still need to change the section headers so they are more visible and align the section themselves. I also still need to add references and so on.  However, any comments on the content or suggestions as to anything that I should add/subtract would be greatly appreciated.

I'm aiming to print this by tomorrow afternoon if possible.  I will incorporate any changes I receive by then.

--Omar Moreno
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