[Hps] [EXTERNAL] Re: Draft of HPS Snowmass submission

[Nelson, Timothy Knight]

Dear HPS,

The Snowmass whitepaper on HPS is public on arXiv:

https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__arxiv.org_abs_2203.08324&d=DwIFAg&c=CJqEzB1piLOyyvZjb8YUQw&r=ErLkbYGWd8oSAZ70ywHxhA&m=bBfuR0NpZXOtVhIxYZWuNoPpgL42A8a_xnJXRU06tmdEugbi_QqOwXPHnb5Ad4jO&s=zjvNmUeVoniMUQOePPc-7bVOKL5Ms5zEG6wp11JTFxE&e= 

Thanks to all who provided feedback and assistance!

Best,
Tim

> On Mar 10, 2022, at 8:50 PM, Nelson, Timothy Knight <tknelson at slac.stanford.edu> wrote:
> 
> Dear HPS,
> 
> As discussed at the meeting yesterday, here is a draft of the HPS review paper intended for submission to Snowmass.  
> 
> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.overleaf.com_8348713226cdcvfhrbxjsg&d=DwIFAg&c=CJqEzB1piLOyyvZjb8YUQw&r=ErLkbYGWd8oSAZ70ywHxhA&m=bBfuR0NpZXOtVhIxYZWuNoPpgL42A8a_xnJXRU06tmdEugbi_QqOwXPHnb5Ad4jO&s=tpDD7exPkeAcXgXB_FvXSCSjJCXoWCgE_othFB--trU&e= 
> 
> In addition to your feedback and general editing, there are a few things that clearly need work still:
> - The author list is provisional and will need significant revision.
> - I have not worked at all on the references yet, with only markers in most places (although many of the required references are already in the bib file)
> - The reach plots for the two concepts discussed in the last section need to be remade to include the latest constraints.
> 
> It may also be worthwhile updating the 2019+2021 reach plot with a better estimate of the 2021 luminosity and the latest curve from NA64, although I suspect the difference for the former is insignificant on the scale of other uncertainties.
> 
> As noted at the meeting, this is supposed to be uploaded by next Tuesday, but that is a soft deadline.  I will forward the recent message on that for those who perhaps are not on the Snowmass mailing list.  Please send me your comments and suggestions for improvements.
> 
> Best,
> Tim