<div dir="ltr">Dear all<div><br></div><div>I approve also<br><br>Please consider going over the references for consistency, <span style="font-size:small;background-color:rgb(255,255,255);text-decoration-style:initial;text-decoration-color:initial;float:none;display:inline">refer to one server for all preprints for uniformity and display only arXiv number instead of url </span></div><div><br></div><div>We could include info</div><div>for ref [1]:<br>Fundamental Physics at the Intensity Frontier<br>ANL-HEP-TR-12-25, SLAC-R-991, FERMILAB-CONF-12-879-PPD<br>and for ref [3]:<br>US Cosmic Visions: New Ideas in Dark Matter 2017: Community Report<br>FERMILAB-CONF-17-282-AE-PPD-T<br><br>Maybe one of the reference already addresses this, Fig 3 contains a lot of information and acronyms, it could be appropriate to point to a single source reviewing all those (<br></div><div><div><br></div><div>Best regards</div><div>FX</div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Tue, Jul 24, 2018 at 12:37 PM Yale, Bradley T <<a href="mailto:btu29@wildcats.unh.edu">btu29@wildcats.unh.edu</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, July 24, 2018 11:51:38 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Stepan Stepanyan<br>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Hps] Second round of collaboration review of our first physics paper</font>
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<div>On 18 Jul 2018, at 17:16, Stepan Stepanyan <<a href="mailto:stepan.g.stepanyan@gmail.com" target="_blank">stepan.g.stepanyan@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div>Draft of the 2015 resonance search paper is ready for the second round of review, see link below. All the comments received as of yesterday have been taken care. Please read and send additional comments you may have to the HPS mailing list (<a href="mailto:hps@jlab.org" target="_blank">hps@jlab.org</a>).
This collaboration review period is for one week (according to our amended bylaws). </div>
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<div>After one week, eob next Wednesday, July 25, a new, final version of the draft will be generated. According to our bylaws the final version must be approval by EC and PPC, and then collaboration will be asked to vote. But since we have been delayed
enough and the draft has been around so long, I want to ask you to send your vote along with your comments, if any, or just a vote if no comments.</div>
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<div>After all formalities are satisfied and collaboration voted in favor, paper will be posed on arxiv and will be sent to the target journal (PRD rapid communications). </div>
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<div><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__confluence.slac.stanford.edu_display_hpsg_Analyses-3Fpreview-3D_211791152_238552527_engrun2015-5Fresonance-5Fsearch-5Fprd-5Frapid-5Fv2pt0.pdf&d=DwMFAg&c=lz9TcOasaINaaC3U7FbMev2lsutwpI4--09aP8Lu18s&r=hGEVsUzUB5ml8iDt6EuOdg&m=R-rHn_pKkMCcyM_DkDp4yZ-t2LC9SiC7nTaZoeMVnJ4&s=mWxsQZmIQWRZAkZgAF-gcXTCodSD_y0LAN4nM8mpq4o&e=" target="_blank">https://confluence.slac.stanford.edu/display/hpsg/Analyses?preview=/211791152/238552527/engrun2015_resonance_search_prd_rapid_v2pt0.pdf</a></div>
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