<div dir="ltr">Liping,<div><br></div><div>Here are some suggested fixes to the submission to Snowmass.</div><div><ul><li style="margin-left:15px">add to "The capability of tagging every η('′) in combination with a state-of-the-art FCAL-II offers two orders of magnitude improvement in background suppression" + ", relative to the existing GlueX FCAL-I calorimeter." The claim of 2 orders of magnitude should be relative to some stated baseline, which I presume is the existing fcal.</li><li style="margin-left:15px">change "A high statistics will be accumulated continuously" to "A high-statistics dataset will be..."</li></ul><div>-Richard</div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Aug 24, 2020 at 5:21 PM Richard Jones <<a href="mailto:rjones30@gmail.com">rjones30@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Liping,<div><br></div><div>Here are some suggested fixes to the submission to Snowmass.</div><div><ul><li>add to "The capability of tagging every η('′) in combination with a state-of-the-art FCAL-II offers two orders of magnitude improvement in background suppression" + ", relative to the existing GlueX FCAL-I calorimeter." The claim of 2 orders of magnitude should be relative to some stated baseline, which I presume is the existing fcal.</li><li>change "A high statistics will be accumulated continuously" to "A high-statistics dataset will be..."</li></ul><div>-Richard</div></div><div><br></div><div>-Richard</div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Aug 24, 2020 at 10:58 AM Gan, Liping <<a href="mailto:ganl@uncw.edu" target="_blank">ganl@uncw.edu</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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Attached file is a LOI draft for Snowmass 2021. I would appreciate very much if you could send me your comments and suggestions by 5pm on Aug 25 .
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