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Dear Jon,<br>
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I have some suggestions/comments:<br>
<br>
The motivation sounds a bit unfamiliar and readers might not get
some of the statements, like<br>
<ul>
<li> 'unique combination of additive quantum numbers' and
'relative ease of production'</li>
<ul>
<li>My point is that to a more general audience it is not clear
what you mean here, why is that and what does it do for the
cause.<br>
</li>
</ul>
</ul>
<ul>
<li> Also, I think it should be 'light quark mass ratio' instead
of 'strange-to-light-quark mass ratio Q' </li>
<ul>
<li> the strange quark is considered light.</li>
</ul>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>In general, the abbreviations BSM, CVPC, and Q are unnecessary
here, as the text does not use them further. </li>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>'The GlueX spectrometer at Je fferson Lab off ers a
high-statistics sample of photoproduced mesons and a unique
degree of forward boosting in the lab frame (p ... 8 GeV) to
suppress backgrounds.'</li>
<ul>
<li> You should say a number for the produced/expected eta
decays when talking about the 'offered' statistics. By offered
you mean with the present setup?</li>
<li>You need to explain: What is unique about the forward
boosting? Why that suppresses background (btw, a word to be
used as a singular noun). <br>
</li>
<li>Again, this sentence does not make it clear what your
message is.</li>
</ul>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>'improve the granularity and resolution of the inner forward
calorimeter to improve sensitivity in key decay channels.'</li>
<ul>
<li>Better to say that this requires the planned upgrade ...
Details of that do not belong in the abstract.</li>
</ul>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>'the current status of eta detection with the GlueX
spectrometer'</li>
<ul>
<li>eta _detection_ cannot be an issue for the GlueX detector.
What is your message here, what are you actually going to
present?<br>
</li>
</ul>
</ul>
Best,<br>
Su.<br>
<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 23.02.21 19:57, Jonathan Zarling
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Hi all,</div>
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I was planning to submit an abstract at the Canadian Association
of Physicists virtual congress on JEF physics. Attached is a
draft of the abstract, please let me know if you have any
thoughts. The deadline is on Feb. 28, I'm also planning to send
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Thanks,</div>
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