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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Dear Mott team,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Attached are my suggested changes with (in the last two cases) my reasons for including them.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Tim<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Mott [mailto:mott-bounces@jlab.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Joe Grames<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, February 6, 2020 2:20 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> mott@jlab.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Mott] Version #8<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Please find attached version #8 of the Mott paper. The attached copy address ~all of the edits we agreed to during our conference call a month ago, thanks especially to Marcy and
Daniel for polishing off the fitting section. A short while after that meeting, Charlie asked that we take one last hard look at how we've categorized and tallied the uncertainties. Riad and Daniel largely championed this assessment, and consequently the
paper is better for it. While there is no new surprise twist ending, the uncertainties and studies therein of what we did are clearly and correctly spelled out.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">If you would like to make some mild polishing, fix grammar or punctuation that's okay, just edit in review mode and return to me by
<b>Monday, Feb 10</b>. Note, I'm not asking for any further edits, and would not fret over layout, fonts, etc, b/c that is dictated by the publisher. However, if you find something objectionable then probably a good idea to reply-all and make your case.
Short of anything that slows this bus down, I would like to submit the paper soon after Monday.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Joe<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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