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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Wassim,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The paper looks good to me, I have the following comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">You have Hamlet Mkrtchyan twice in authors list (like Charles comment, and it might be already addressed)<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">It seems to me (maybe I’m wrong) there is some different font formats used in some places eg line 4-5<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">For Figure 4. I suggest using
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"NimbusRomNo9L",serif">“</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The red-starred samples …”</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> instead of “</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"NimbusRomNo9L",serif">The
eleven highlighted samples…”</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">And instead of “Jefferson Lab” use “Thomas Jefferson National Accelerator Facility”</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Arshak<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="color:black">Nps <nps-bounces@jlab.org> on behalf of Hyde, Charles E. via Nps <nps@jlab.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, July 23, 2025 at 2:26</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span style="color:black">PM<br>
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<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Nps] [EXTERNAL] Re: Draft of NPS Resolution Article<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Wassim,<br>
Very nice paper. I will post some typographic suggestions on elog.<br>
In the meantime, please look over the author list/affiliations carefully.<br>
I think things tend to get scrambled with each edit.<br>
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Here are my corrections:<br>
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Carlos Ayerbe Gayoso is at ODU.<br>
Tanja Horn is at CUA (Maybe also JLab)<br>
I am at ODU (not Illinois)<br>
Please ask Wenliang Li (B.Li) how he wants his name and affiliation listed (he joined Mississippi in the middle of experiment).<br>
Holly Szumila-Vance is at Florida International University<br>
Steve Wood is affiliated with Old Dominion University<br>
You have two entries for Z.Ye, one listed at ODU. This doesn't seem correct to me.<br>
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Sincerely,<br>
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Dr. Charles E. Hyde<br>
Eminent Scholar and University Professor of Physics<br>
Old Dominion University<br>
Department of Physics<br>
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Attached below the article draft (was so excited that i forgot to attach it in the previous email :) ).<br>
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Best regards,<br>
Wassim Hamdi<br>
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Le mar. 22 juill. 2025, à 13 h 11, Wassim Hamdi <wassim.haamdiii@gmail.com<mailto:wassim.haamdiii@gmail.com>> a écrit :<br>
Dear NPS Collaborators,<br>
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I'm pleased to share a draft article on the Intrinsic Energy and Time Resolution of NPS, which we intend to submit to the NIM A journal. Please review the draft and provide any feedback, comments, or suggestions by August 3rd. Kindly also verify your names
and affiliations.<br>
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Thank you all for your continued support and contributions to the NPS project.<br>
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Best regards,<br>
Wassim Hamdi<br>
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