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<div><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Dear Wassim,</span>
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<div><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Very nice paper! </span>
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<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">Some suggestions below: </font></div>
<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">A. Tadepalli -> A.S. Tadepalli</font>
<div><font color="#000000">Line 95: PbWO -> PbWO4</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">Figure 2 caption: NPS + HMS structure in HALL C -> NPS calorimeter + HMS spectrometer in Hall C or <span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">NPS + HMS structure in Hall C</span></font>
<div><font color="#000000">Line 122: stable within -> stable to within</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">Line 146: reference shapes, who obey -> reference shapes, which obey </font></div>
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<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">Equation 11: Should the third term have a + or is the + missing a circle around it? What are the errors in all the three terms? </font></div>
<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">Figure 9: A follow up tho the email previously sent:</font></div>
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<li><font color="#000000">Are the three consecutive settings (red empty squares) indicated in Table 1 of the paper? What about the open squares and black circles? Which settings do they correspond to in Table 1? But table 1 has a total of 2 + 2 + 5 settings
and seems like you used only 6 of the settings for the parameterization. </font></li><li><font color="#000000">What are the black circles? Are they used in the fit or are they not optimal? </font></li></ul>
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<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">Figure 11: What does the red line correspond to?</font></div>
<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">You may want to create a “References” section right after Conclusions and before the actual references.</font></div>
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<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">Best regards,</font></div>
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<div style="caret-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">Arun</font></div>
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<div>On Jul 23, 2025, at 4:19 PM, Arshak Asaturyan via Nps <nps@jlab.org> wrote:</div>
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<div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: Aptos, sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt;">Hi Wassim,<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: Aptos, sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt;">The paper looks good to me, I have the following comments:<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 11pt;">You have Hamlet Mkrtchyan twice in authors list (like Charles comment, and it might be already addressed)<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: Aptos, sans-serif;">
<span style="font-size: 11pt;">It seems to me (maybe I’m wrong) there is some different font formats used in some places eg line 4-5<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: Aptos, sans-serif;">
<span style="font-size: 11pt;">For Figure 4. I suggest using<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: NimbusRomNo9L, serif;">“</span><span style="font-size: 11pt;">The red-starred samples …”</span><span style="font-size: 11pt;"><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>instead
of “</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: NimbusRomNo9L, serif;">The eleven highlighted samples…”</span><span style="font-size: 11pt;">.</span><span style="font-size: 11pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: Aptos, sans-serif;">
<span style="font-size: 11pt;">And instead of “Jefferson Lab” use “Thomas Jefferson National Accelerator Facility”</span><span style="font-size: 11pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: Aptos, sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt;">Thank you,<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<b><span style="">From:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span style="">Nps <nps-bounces@jlab.org> on behalf of Hyde, Charles E. via Nps <nps@jlab.org><br>
<b>Date:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Wednesday, July 23, 2025 at 2:26</span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif;"> </span><span style="">PM<br>
<b>To:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>nps@jlab.org <nps@jlab.org>, wassim@jlab.org <wassim@jlab.org>, Wassim Hamdi <wassim.haamdiii@gmail.com><br>
<b>Subject:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Re: [Nps] [EXTERNAL] Re: Draft of NPS Resolution Article<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: Aptos, sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt;">Wassim,<br>
Very nice paper. I will post some typographic suggestions on elog.<br>
In the meantime, please look over the author list/affiliations carefully.<br>
I think things tend to get scrambled with each edit.<br>
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Here are my corrections:<br>
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Carlos Ayerbe Gayoso is at ODU.<br>
Tanja Horn is at CUA (Maybe also JLab)<br>
I am at ODU (not Illinois)<br>
Please ask Wenliang Li (B.Li) how he wants his name and affiliation listed (he joined Mississippi in the middle of experiment).<br>
Holly Szumila-Vance is at Florida International University<br>
Steve Wood is affiliated with Old Dominion University<br>
You have two entries for Z.Ye, one listed at ODU. This doesn't seem correct to me.<br>
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Sincerely,<br>
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Dr. Charles E. Hyde<br>
Eminent Scholar and University Professor of Physics<br>
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Attached below the article draft (was so excited that i forgot to attach it in the previous email :) ).<br>
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Le mar. 22 juill. 2025, à 13 h 11, Wassim Hamdi <wassim.haamdiii@gmail.com<mailto:wassim.haamdiii@gmail.com>> a écrit :<br>
Dear NPS Collaborators,<br>
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I'm pleased to share a draft article on the Intrinsic Energy and Time Resolution of NPS, which we intend to submit to the NIM A journal. Please review the draft and provide any feedback, comments, or suggestions by August 3rd. Kindly also verify your names
and affiliations.<br>
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Thank you all for your continued support and contributions to the NPS project.<br>
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Best regards,<br>
Wassim Hamdi<br>
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