[Nuclear] Draft of NUINT 2011 talk for review

[Steven L. Manly]

Thanks for your comments Marco.  I do need to flesh out the motivations
section a bit more and I will look over the start of the slides with what
you say in mind.  Perhaps I am taking too much for granted ... but, at
this particular venue I think they will know what I'm leading up to.  The
whole session that I am in is on electron data feeding into the tuning of
neutrino generators.  Still I should make sure that I state explicitly
what I am doing.

Regards,
Steve

> Hi Steve,
> I can hardly understand what kind of cross sections/observables you are
> measuring in this experiment from the first slides of your talk. Only at
> the end I can grasp that you're after pion electroproduction off nuclei.
> You should state clearly at the beginning what you are measuring here
> and perhaps also why they want to measure similar observables in
> neutrino beam experiments (and expand a bit more on how the two things
> are related to each other), although that may be rather obvious to the
> audience of this particular venue.
>
> Regards
> Marco
>
> Steven L. Manly wrote:
>> Dear Nuclear Physics Working Group,
>>
>> I am presenting EG2 results at the NUINT 2011 conference
>> (Neutrino-nucleus
>> interactions in the few-GeV region) in a week. The talk is for 25+5
>> minutes.  I may need to adjust the slides after timing it.  An almost
>> finished draft of the talk for your review is at
>>
>> http://www.pas.rochester.edu/~manly/NUINT_2011_Manly.pdf
>>
>> I wanted to finish it
>> before sending it to you, but the presentation date is fast approaching
>> and it will be another day before I can finish the draft.  So, I felt it
>> more important to go ahead and get this out there and get feedback.  The
>> CLAS/EG2 slides are finished more or less.  I am attaching this draft
>> and
>> have marked the places where I  still need to do something with a little
>> orange/black man (a copy of the apologizing man they have on signs
>> beside
>> Japanese road construction sites).  The only significant missing part
>> now
>> is that I need to expand the motivation section a little. I apologize
>> for
>> not getting this out to you sooner.
>> Comments/corrections/advice/objections are requested.
>>
>> Sincerely,
>> Steve
>>
>>
>
> --
>
> Marco Ripani
> Senior Scientist, Istituto Nazionale di Fisica Nucleare - Genova
> Address:
> INFN
> Via Dodecaneso 33
> 16146 GENOVA - ITALY
> tel./fax 39-010-3536458
> cell. 39-328-2191138
> Jlab office room F244
> tel. 1-757-269-7266  fax 1-757-269-6273
> E-Mail: ripani at ge.infn.it
>
>