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Dear Rakhsha,<br>
<br>
Nicely composed abstract!<br>
<br>
I have some minor comments:<br>
<br>
Paragraph 1<br>
Line1: I would rephrase the first sentence to make it state the
problem that your study aims to attack. <br>
Something like " The short-distance structure, short-range
correlations, and meson-exchange currents in <br>
nuclei are important problems in nuclear physics that still have not
been resolved.<br>
Line 3: "These processes, together..." - a comma<br>
<br>
Paragraph 2<br>
Line 1: "The study of ... excitations, and specifically..., is an
important..." - two commas<br>
Line 3: "local high-density spots" - a hyphen<br>
Line 6: "in an excited state"<br>
Paragraph 3<br>
Line 1: "Recent experiments at JLab provide..." or do you mean "A
recent experiment ... provides"<br>
Line 3: "one or more Delta-isobars"<br>
<br>
I would restructure the last paragraph a bit to something like<br>
In the g3a experiment with the CLAS at Jefferson Lab, a
high-statistics data set was collected using incident photon beam <br>
with energies of 0.5 -- 1.5 GeV on a liquid 3He target. In this work
we study various photoproduction reactions that contain ...., such
as ...<br>
We will discuss preliminary results and future plans.<br>
<br>
I am not sure if so many paragraphs are needed in the abstract.<br>
<br>
Best regards, Yordanka<br>
<br>
On 1/12/11 9:50 AM, rakhsha nasseripour wrote:
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<pre wrap="">Dear Hovanes, and Nuclear physics working group,
I intend to send the attached abstract to the APS April meeting. This is a new analysis on g3 data in continuation
of our previous efforts to study few-body forces. This analysis is in early stage now, but we hope to have preliminary
results by the next collaboration meeting, and the APS April meeting.
Please let me know what you think. Suggestions and corrections are very welcome. The deadline for submission
is this Friday.
Thanks,
Rakhsha
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