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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Nathan,<br>
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The way the abstract is written (in present tense) make it sound
like you are planning the experiment to run now or in the near
future. It is better to put it into past tense. Also, the sentence
"A 6 GeV longitundinally polarized electron beam and gaseous 4He
target, combined with the large acceptance CLAS detector system,
augmented by a radial time projection chamber for nuclear recoils
and small calorimeter for forward photons, makes this possible. "
(which every German would love when expressed in German language)
should be broken up into at least two sentences. Then you could
say more about the radial TPC, the calorimeter, and target. <br>
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You may also want to add the kinematic covered in the experiment
in Q2 and x. Also, the motivation is not only to see nuclear
effects, but also to get directly GPD "H" from this experiement on
4He (which is the only GPD contributing in leading twist. Also,
it is better to write out isospin=0 and spin=0 rather than "lack
of (iso)spin." <br>
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Best regards,<br>
Volker<br>
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On 1/8/15, 3:46 PM, Kawtar Hafidi wrote:<br>
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ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:rgb(153,0,255)">Dear All,<br>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:trebuchet
ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:rgb(153,0,255)">This is an
abstract to the upcoming APS by Nathan Baltzell. Please send
your comments by tomorrow. Sorry for the late notice.<br>
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ms,sans-serif;font-size:small;color:rgb(153,0,255)">Best,<br>
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Kawtar<br>
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From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Nathan Baltzell</b> <span
dir="ltr"><<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:baltzell@jlab.org">baltzell@jlab.org</a>></span><br>
Date: Thu, Jan 8, 2015 at 8:43 PM<br>
Subject: Fwd: abstract for APS<br>
To: Kawtar Hafidi <<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:kawtar@anl.gov">kawtar@anl.gov</a>><br>
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<div style="word-wrap:break-word">Hi Kawtar,
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<div>Can you send this abstract to the working group for me?</div>
<div>Looks like I can’t send email from the account I used
to sign up to the mailing list previously.</div>
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<div>Thanks,</div>
<div>Nathan</div>
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style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(0,0,0,1.0)"><b>From: </b></span><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica'"><a
moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:nuclear-owner@jlab.org"
target="_blank">nuclear-owner@jlab.org</a><br>
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style="margin-top:0px;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:0px;margin-left:0px"><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(0,0,0,1.0)"><b>Subject: </b></span><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica'"><b>abstract for
APS</b><br>
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style="margin-top:0px;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:0px;margin-left:0px"><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(0,0,0,1.0)"><b>Date: </b></span><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica'">January 8, 2015 at
15:10:11 EST<br>
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style="margin-top:0px;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:0px;margin-left:0px"><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(0,0,0,1.0)"><b>To: </b></span><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica'"><a
moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:baltzell@jlab.org" target="_blank">baltzell@jlab.org</a><br>
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<br>
<div>Sorry, posting to this list is restricted.<br>
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style="margin-top:0px;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:0px;margin-left:0px"><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(127,127,127,1.0)"><b>From: </b></span><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica'">Nathan Baltzell
<<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:baltzell@jlab.org"
target="_blank">baltzell@jlab.org</a>><br>
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<div
style="margin-top:0px;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:0px;margin-left:0px"><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(127,127,127,1.0)"><b>Subject:
</b></span><span style="font-family:'Helvetica'"><b>abstract
for APS</b><br>
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<div
style="margin-top:0px;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:0px;margin-left:0px"><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(127,127,127,1.0)"><b>Date: </b></span><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica'">January 8, 2015
at 15:10:51 EST<br>
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style="font-family:'Helvetica';color:rgba(127,127,127,1.0)"><b>To: </b></span><span
style="font-family:'Helvetica'"><a
moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:nuclear@jlab.org" target="_blank">nuclear@jlab.org</a>,
<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:deeppwg@jlab.org" target="_blank">deeppwg@jlab.org</a><br>
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Dear Everyone,<br>
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Attached is an abstract on He-4 DVCS from eg6 for
submission tomorrow for the APS meeting.<br>
Please send your comments.<br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
Nathan<br>
<br>
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