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Please reword your demands.</div>
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, August 19, 2025 1:15 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Valerie Bookwalter <bookwalt@jlab.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> pansophy <pansophy@jlab.org>; Tony Reilly <areilly@jlab.org>; Peter Owen <powen@jlab.org>; Alex Wildeson <wildeson@jlab.org>; Alex Castilla Loeza <acastill@jlab.org>; Ashley Mitchell <ashleya@jlab.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: AUPCAV Documents - drawings and revisions are needed</font>
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Hi Valerie,</div>
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The drawings are only used for illustrative purposes for this document. If the drawings were revised, there would be no need to update the procedure. As such, there is no need to reference the drawings/revisions. The only drawing that this does not apply to
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As a reminder, this is a revision of a procedure which was previously approved, and the changes in the revision are not related to or affected by the screenshots. Please begin the routing process for the revision.</div>
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Thanks,</div>
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 18, 2025 7:11 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Naeem Huque <huque@jlab.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> pansophy <pansophy@jlab.org>; Tony Reilly <areilly@jlab.org>; Peter Owen <powen@jlab.org>; Alex Wildeson <wildeson@jlab.org>; Alex Castilla Loeza <acastill@jlab.org>; Ashley Mitchell <ashleya@jlab.org><br>
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Are other drawing being used as references in the travelers/procedures, then they need to be listed in the references section. Thank You</div>
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<div id="x_x_divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" color="#000000" style="font-size:11pt"><b>From:</b> Naeem Huque <huque@jlab.org><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 18, 2025 6:59 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Valerie Bookwalter <bookwalt@jlab.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> pansophy <pansophy@jlab.org>; Tony Reilly <areilly@jlab.org>; Peter Owen <powen@jlab.org>; Alex Wildeson <wildeson@jlab.org>; Alex Castilla Loeza <acastill@jlab.org>; Ashley Mitchell <ashleya@jlab.org><br>
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Hi Valerie,</div>
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As I said, the relevant drawings are already linked as references. No more are needed</div>
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Thanks,</div>
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<div id="x_x_x_divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" color="#000000" style="font-size:11pt"><b>From:</b> Valerie Bookwalter <bookwalt@jlab.org><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 18, 2025 6:55:01 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Naeem Huque <huque@jlab.org><br>
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Please include drawings and their revision for our records.</div>
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 18, 2025 5:04 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Allen Samuels <samuels@jlab.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> pansophy <pansophy@jlab.org>; Tony Reilly <areilly@jlab.org>; Peter Owen <powen@jlab.org>; Alex Wildeson <wildeson@jlab.org>; Alex Castilla Loeza <acastill@jlab.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Pansophy] AUPCAV Documents</font>
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Hi Allen,</div>
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The only drawing that is needed is already referenced. There are no others required.</div>
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Thanks,</div>
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 18, 2025 4:47 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Naeem Huque <huque@jlab.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> pansophy <pansophy@jlab.org>; Tony Reilly <areilly@jlab.org>; Peter Owen <powen@jlab.org>; Alex Wildeson <wildeson@jlab.org>; Alex Castilla Loeza <acastill@jlab.org><br>
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Thank you Naeem, I will keep an eye out for their comments.</div>
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Regarding the screenshots as references, I was referring to several instances in the documents where screenshots were made of what appeared to be Jlab drawings. If those drawings are being referenced and are needed for the procedure, I believe they should be
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 18, 2025 4:44 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Allen Samuels <samuels@jlab.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> pansophy <pansophy@jlab.org>; Tony Reilly <areilly@jlab.org>; Peter Owen <powen@jlab.org>; Alex Wildeson <wildeson@jlab.org>; Alex Castilla Loeza <acastill@jlab.org><br>
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Hi Allen,</div>
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Including screenshots as references is not a requirement and will not be done. Please do not hold up any of these for undocumented rules.</div>
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AUPCAV-PR-VTA-CAV-VTRF-R2</div>
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<div role="presentation">Peter will address the other points</div>
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<div role="presentation">Figures names have been fixed</div>
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<div role="presentation">Document has been uploaded again to the ready folder</div>
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<div role="presentation">If there isn't, and something is needed, then this can be added:
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No updates to the WCD are required, minor or major.</div>
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Thanks,</div>
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<b>To:</b> Naeem Huque <huque@jlab.org>; Peter Owen <powen@jlab.org>; Alex Wildeson <wildeson@jlab.org><br>
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I've reviewed the AUPCAV traveler and procedures put in ready for approvals, and have to send them back to you for review.</div>
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AUPCAV-PR-VTA-CAV-VTRF-R2</div>
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<div role="presentation">The procedure was in an old template and needed to be moved over to the latest one. I have done so for you. Please review my work to make sure everything flows well.</div>
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<div role="presentation">There was nothing in the original document to put into the SAFETY section. If it is not needed, it can be removed.</div>
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<div role="presentation">The approval names do not match the WCD.</div>
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<div role="presentation">The table and figure numbers do not match between the tables and figures and the references in the document. Please double check they line up correctly.</div>
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<div role="presentation">Please double check that the drawings from which the screenshots were made are listed in the references section.</div>
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<div role="presentation">The approval names do not match the WCD.</div>
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<div role="presentation">There's a bullet point in section 5.5.6, page 15, that I think doesn't mention torquing when it should. I've left a comment to help find the bullet in question.</div>
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<div role="presentation">The table and figure numbers do not match between the tables and figures and the references in the document. Please double check they line up correctly.</div>
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<div role="presentation">Please double check that the drawings from which the screenshots were made are listed in the references section.</div>
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<div role="presentation">There are no references listed and linked in the traveler, which is now required for travelers. Please include any reference material needed to complete the traveler.</div>
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I've attached the traveler and procedures to this email. Please review my edits, make any changes you deem necessary to solve the issues listed, and put into
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ready for approvals</a> as new versions. As for the approval names not matching, there are three options as I see them.</div>
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<div role="presentation">Make minor revisions to the WCD that only require the WCL to sign off. Because this crosses Work Centers, this option will require two minor edits.</div>
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<div role="presentation">Make a major revision to the WCD that I send out to the full approval list</div>
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<div role="presentation">Let me know to change the documents to match the WCD register.</div>
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Please let me know how you would like to proceed.</div>
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