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Dear PEPPo Collaborator:<br>
<br>
<u>Based on today's meeting here is our remaining punchlist
regarding version 7:<b><br>
</b></u><br>
1. (<b>Larry</b>) - P10. Clarify "(un)polarized" with respect to
Eq. 3 and Eq. 4.<br>
<br>
2. (<b>Arne</b>) - P12. Update Fig. 2 to include spin rotator
solenoids and/or send Joe file to do it.<br>
<br>
3. (<b>Larry</b>) - P15. Change Table 1 caption to reflect "beam and
machine parameters in region 0". Please add row above "accelerating
frequency" that lists the "cw bunch frequency" as 499 MHz.<br>
<br>
4. (<b>Larry</b>) - P21. Change Table 2 caption to reflect "PEPPo
beam parameters in region 1", and eliminate first 11 rows<br>
<br>
5. (<b>Arne</b>) - P15. Introduce E166 experiment on p.14 before
"The details of each region..."<br>
<br>
6. (<b>Larry</b>) - P18. Increase size of Fig. 8, as possible, so
text more readable<br>
<br>
7. (<b>Eric</b>) - P28. Generate new Fig. 18 of only central crystal
w/ more readable axes<br>
<br>
8. (<b>Larry</b>) - P38. Follow text which says "two re-conversion
target settings" add "(1mm, 2mm)"<br>
<br>
9. (<b>Arne</b>) - P39. After first sentence of section 7, provide
text to say we propose to do during 12MSD; should go into abstract
too?<br>
<br>
10. (<b>Joe/Eric/Larry</b>) - Joe will re-write section 4 being
atypically succinct, then send to Eric for edits and figures
adjustments and then to Larry by very early Thursday AM EST.<br>
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