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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">Dear Erik:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">Apart from the comments you received already, please note that we are not covering 5 orders of magnitude of range in Q^2, we are from 10^-2 to 10^-5. Please revise this part.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">PRad <prad-bounces@jlab.org> on behalf of gasparan via PRad <prad@jlab.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, July 14, 2025 at 4:23</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Wrightson, Erik <eaw461@msstate.edu><br>
<b>Cc: </b>PRad mail group <prad@jlab.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [PRad] [EXTERNAL] Erik Wrightson's DNP Abstract for Collaboration Review/Approval<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Dear Erik,<br>
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The abstract is very good. I agree with Patrick's comments, and would <br>
like<br>
to add a few more general suggestions related to all other upcoming <br>
abstracts.<br>
As we always try to emphasize, the first goal of the PRad-II experiment <br>
is<br>
to provide a new, high precision form factor measurement at a very low <br>
Q2 range.<br>
The second comment is related to the experimental method: adding the <br>
tracking<br>
capability in the experiment (by 2 plains of GEM detectors).<br>
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Good luck,<br>
Ashot<br>
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On 2025-07-13 22:57, Wrightson, Erik via PRad wrote:<br>
> Hello Everyone,<br>
> <br>
> Attached you will find the draft of my proposed abstract for a<br>
> 10-minute oral presentation at the Fall APS-DNP meeting in Chicago. My<br>
> advisor, Dr. Dipangkar Dutta, has already reviewed and approved the<br>
> content of the abstract. I plan to give a brief overview of the<br>
> PRad-II experimental goals and setup and then focus on HyCal and the<br>
> DAQ performance in testing and installation. Please let me know if you<br>
> have any comments or concerns. For reference, there is a 1300<br>
> character limit and the current draft is at 1299 characters so please<br>
> keep that in mind when suggesting any edits. The submission is due<br>
> Tuesday (07/15). Please reply with any comments, if you have any, as<br>
> soon as you are able. Thank you.<br>
> <br>
> Best,<br>
> Erik Wrightson (he/him)<br>
> <br>
> Ph.D. Graduate Student at Mississippi State University<br>
> B.S. Physics - Virginia Tech 2021<br>
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