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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">Dear Yuan:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">Thank you and good work!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">I suggest that we switch the order of these two slides, so response to Recommendation 2 is followed by recommendation 4.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">On your response to recommendation 2, you illustrate the upper stream target cell window and used singular form “target cell window” in the first bullet. I want to make sure that your ~9% number is based
on the simulation including both target cell windows, as both should be included. Change window to windows and indicate both windows on the drawing.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">If you do not plan on sending slides 3-5, that is fine. If you do, then, you will need to include other target cell configurations on slide 3.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">There are small language related issues that you can improve. Slide 1, please use upper scripts to describe 10^{-5}. 10^{-7} in the quoted committee recommendation, etc..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt">Best, Haiyan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Haiyan Gao
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Phone: 919-660-2622<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">PRad <prad-bounces@jlab.org> on behalf of
</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Microsoft YaHei",sans-serif;color:black">李远</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black"> Li, Yuan via PRad <prad@jlab.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Friday, July 25, 2025 at 11:15</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">AM<br>
<b>To: </b>prad <prad@jlab.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[PRad] [EXTERNAL] ERR recommendation reply darft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Source Han Sans",serif">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Source Han Sans",serif">In attachment you could find the draft to reply the ERR recommendation. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Source Han Sans",serif">The first two pages are addressing and replying the 2 recommendations. And the last 3 pages are additional informations.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Please let me know if you have any comments or suggestions.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Source Han Sans",serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Yuan Li</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Source Han Sans",serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:15.0pt"><b><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:SimSun;color:#232D47">李远</span></b><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Source Han Sans",serif;color:#232D47"> Li, Yuan<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:12.0pt"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Source Han Sans",serif;color:#7A8599">lyuan@mail.sdu.edu.cn<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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