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<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">Hi Pawel !</p>
<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">Paper looks really good. I have only few comments - do you need that many word splitting ?
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<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">It makes harder to read paper, specially in "Conclusion" where its like every single line.
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<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">Also, is you are using data from Run I you might consider to mention
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<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">in acknowledgement grants used for it [NSF (PHY-0079840) DOE No. DE-AC05-84ER40150 (?)</p>
<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">Best,</p>
<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">Anatoly.<br>
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, December 11, 2018 1:14:36 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> pawel@jlab.org<br>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Primex] Compton paper - draft</font>
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Hi Pawel,<br>
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Very good progress, congratulations.<br>
I think we need to look at the authors list once more, also<br>
I will send some comments, mostly some text typos.<br>
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Ashot<br>
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> Attached please find a draft of the Compton article.<br>
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> Please review it thoroughly and send comments and suggestions you might<br>
> have.<br>
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> Sincerely,<br>
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