<div dir="ltr"><br><div class="gmail_quote">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Robert S. Mahurin</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:Robert.Mahurin@mtsu.edu">Robert.Mahurin@mtsu.edu</a>></span><br>Date: Tue, Oct 14, 2014 at 11:39 AM<br>Subject: RE: [Qweak_bnssa_elastic_ep_authors] Final draft of the elastic ep transverse paper - Comments due by October 17th, 2014<br>To: "<a href="mailto:buddhini@jlab.org">buddhini@jlab.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:buddhini@jlab.org">buddhini@jlab.org</a>><br><br><br>Hi Buddhini,<br>
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This is a very nice paper! My only copyediting-type comment is that in line 246 the idiom is "in principle," rather than your "in principal."<br>
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There are a few places where there are typesetting quirks that draw my eye; I suppose that fixing those is mostly the job of the editorial staff at the journal, but it doesn't hurt to submit them correctly.<br>
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* Hyphens (LaTeX "-") that should be en-dashes (LaTeX "--") to separate numbers in a range. Lines 99, 135<br>
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* Hyphens (LaTeX "-") that should be math-mode minus signs ("$-$"): line 148, 152, 175, 205, table I, table III<br>
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* equation 1 and following: I'd do $\sigma_\uparrow$ rather than your $\sigma\uparrow$, etc.<br>
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* equation 1 and following: $\mathrm{Abs}\,M^{\gamma\gamma}$ if "abs" is the absolute value operator. Alternatively see <a href="http://tinyurl.com/nbpbprx" target="_blank">http://tinyurl.com/nbpbprx</a>.<br>
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Cheers,<br>
Rob<br>
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Rob Mahurin<br>
<span class="">Department of Physics and Astronomy<br>
</span>Middle Tennessee State University<br>
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