[Bonuslist] BONUS PRL

[Wally Melnitchouk]

Keith,

Thanks for the updates.

3) I agree to make the panels are large as possible; however, changing
the W* scale on the top-left and bottom-right will make the points
more crowded.  And changing the F2n axis scale to be the same for all
panels will significantly squeeze the points on the bottom-right panel,
if the scale is extended to 0.35 (as in the top-left panel).

Have the Malace et al. points been tweaked to make them more visible cf.
the current gray?  Also, I would remove the box around the legend and
make the legend entries 2 x as big.

4) And if we're still tweaking figures, I would also cut the F2n/F2p axis
in Fig. 3 at ~ 0.85 or 0.9, to emphasize the data points even more (moving
the legend a little if necessary).  This way the inset could be made a bit
larger as well.

Wally


On Mon, 19 Sep 2011, Keith Griffioen wrote:

> Hi everyone,
>
> I've posted a new version of the paper at Hall-B/secure/bonus/BoNuS_PRL
> There you will also find a file CollaborationComments.pdf
>
> I have tried to take care of the comments the best that I could.
> There are still a few things to answer:
>
> 1) Do the figures contain the 3% overall normalization in the
> systematic error bands?  Once I know for sure, I can correct the text
> accordingly.
>
> 2) Were there more comments than those from Arrington, DeSancti, and
> Ireland?   I don't receive comments directly, so I wouldn't know.
>
> 3) We should make the panels in Figure 2 bigger, all the same size,
> and without tick or axis titles in between.
>
> 4) What are the errors in the inset in Figure 3?  I would either just
> use points without error bars, or draw three curves to indicate
> average Q2.
>
> 5) We probably need to put in other acknowledgements of funding
> agencies, even though nobody complained about it.
>
> 6) Who gets to put in the final author list?  Where does it come from?
>
> Thanks,
> Keith
>
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