[Bonuslist] Draft of my talk on BONuS12 status for the CLAS collaboration meeting

[Carlos Ayerbe]

Hello Mohammad,

the presentation is very good but I think it is too much for a 20'' presentation, specially if the goal is to present updates. I mean, there are too much information on each slide to dedicate less than 1 minute per slide.

Some ideas, check if you like some.

Slide 2-7 i suggest to reduce the slides 2-7 as much as you can. 

Slides 9-10 are ok but too much information for an update. 

Slide 13, I won't enter in details since the new track finder has became a mystery for me, but I don't understand what you wrote there. BTW, the upper picture is mine.

Slides 14-15 I think those have a very new information to present and should be more detailed.

Slides 16-17 perhaps comprise in one slide?

Slide 19 EPICS slow control by Narbe Kalantarians and VUU students

Slides 20-21 do you really want to touch those issues? 

Good luck

-Carlos

----- Original Message -----
From: "mhattawy at odu.edu" <mohammad.hattawy at gmail.com>
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Sent: Friday, July 6, 2018 3:48:08 PM
Subject: [Bonuslist] Draft of my talk on BONuS12 status for the CLAS	collaboration meeting

Dear all, 
Please find attached my preliminary slides for the updates on BONuS12 preparation that I will be giving next week at the CLAS collaboration meeting. Please let me know if I somehow dropped your name, some updates you want to mention, corrections, or suggestions. 

Best regards, 
Mohammad Hattawy. 

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