[Bonuslist] Draft of my talk on BONuS12 status for the CLAS collaboration meeting

[mhattawy@odu.edu]

Thanks Carlos,
     Definitely I will take your suggestions into consideration.

Have a nice weekend,
Mohammad.

On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 4:24 PM, Carlos Ayerbe <gayoso at jlab.org> wrote:

> Hello Mohammad,
>
> the presentation is very good but I think it is too much for a 20''
> presentation, specially if the goal is to present updates. I mean, there
> are too much information on each slide to dedicate less than 1 minute per
> slide.
>
> Some ideas, check if you like some.
>
> Slide 2-7 i suggest to reduce the slides 2-7 as much as you can.
>
> Slides 9-10 are ok but too much information for an update.
>
> Slide 13, I won't enter in details since the new track finder has became a
> mystery for me, but I don't understand what you wrote there. BTW, the upper
> picture is mine.
>
> Slides 14-15 I think those have a very new information to present and
> should be more detailed.
>
> Slides 16-17 perhaps comprise in one slide?
>
> Slide 19 EPICS slow control by Narbe Kalantarians and VUU students
>
> Slides 20-21 do you really want to touch those issues?
>
> Good luck
>
> -Carlos
>
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> Sent: Friday, July 6, 2018 3:48:08 PM
> Subject: [Bonuslist] Draft of my talk on BONuS12 status for the CLAS
> collaboration meeting
>
> Dear all,
> Please find attached my preliminary slides for the updates on BONuS12
> preparation that I will be giving next week at the CLAS collaboration
> meeting. Please let me know if I somehow dropped your name, some updates
> you want to mention, corrections, or suggestions.
>
> Best regards,
> Mohammad Hattawy.
>
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Mohammad Hattawy.
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