[Bonuslist] Abstract

[Carlos Ayerbe Gayoso]

Hi David,

a couple of points:

  *   measure the structure of the neutron -> measure the structure function of the neutron
  *   sure you don't want to go deep in the abstract, but perhaps you should mention that it is a semi-inclusive reaction (electrons in CLAS12 and the spectator proton).
  *   not a big thing, but in literature GEM is Gas Electron Multipliers, and note that previously you write the whole name and the the acronym.
  *   I think you need to rewrite the end of the abstract "... of the tracking hardware and software.", maybe I miss something but there is no tracking hardware, is there?

good luck!!

Cheers

-Carlos
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From: David Payette <dpaye001 at odu.edu<mailto:dpaye001 at odu.edu>>
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Dear collaborators,

I would like to submit an abstract for the APS meeting in the fall. If you'd like to review the abstract then please see the attached document.

Thank you for your time,
David Payette

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