[Clas12_high_luminosity] [EXTERNAL] Talk on the clas12 luminosity upgrade

[Stepan Stepanyan]

Hello Mariangela,

Nice presentations, here are my comments:

Slide 5 - table in the middle angular coverage 5 - 40 for forwards detector
Slide 10, first line on the top: change “detectors: to “layer” and add (MPGD) after it.
Slide 10 - first bullet on the bottom: change “sectors” to “detectors”, the same in the second bullet. Add “degree” after “10” in the last bullet.
Slide 14 - I wold not say “complimentary to EIC". Also, quality of the rest of the slide is not good.
Slide 15 - the same comment about quality.
Slide 16 - first bullet, I think you want to say “Two main challenges”.
Slide 17 and on forward - looks like you have issue with importing picture, they loos quality. Attached some pictures, see if these help.

Regards, Stepan

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On Apr 7, 2024, at 4:58 PM, Mariangela Bondí <mariangela.bondi at ge.infn.it<mailto:mariangela.bondi at ge.infn.it>> wrote:

Dear all,

Next week I will give a talk at DIS2024 titled: the clas12 luminosity upgrade and future physics opportunities. I m writing to share with you my presentation in order to have your feedback.
Attached you can find my slides. Let me know if you have any comments / corrections / suggestions.

Thanks a lot in advance !

Best regards,
Mariangela


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