[Clas12_high_luminosity] [EXTERNAL] Talk on the clas12 luminosity upgrade

[Mariangela Bondí]

Dear Stepan
Thanks a lot for your feedback. I implemented your suggestions 

Best regards 
Mariangela 

> On Apr 8, 2024, at 01:49, Stepan Stepanyan <stepanya at jlab.org> wrote:
> 
> Hello Mariangela,
> 
> Nice presentations, here are my comments:
> 
> Slide 5 - table in the middle angular coverage 5 - 40 for forwards detector
> Slide 10, first line on the top: change “detectors: to “layer” and add (MPGD) after it. 
> Slide 10 - first bullet on the bottom: change “sectors” to “detectors”, the same in the second bullet. Add “degree” after “10” in the last bullet. 
> Slide 14 - I wold not say “complimentary to EIC". Also, quality of the rest of the slide is not good. 
> Slide 15 - the same comment about quality.
> Slide 16 - first bullet, I think you want to say “Two main challenges”.
> Slide 17 and on forward - looks like you have issue with importing picture, they loos quality. Attached some pictures, see if these help.
> 
> Regards, Stepan
> 
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>> On Apr 7, 2024, at 4:58 PM, Mariangela Bondí <mariangela.bondi at ge.infn.it <mailto:mariangela.bondi at ge.infn.it>> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear all,
>> 
>> Next week I will give a talk at DIS2024 titled: the clas12 luminosity upgrade and future physics opportunities. I m writing to share with you my presentation in order to have your feedback. 
>> Attached you can find my slides. Let me know if you have any comments / corrections / suggestions. 
>> 
>> Thanks a lot in advance !
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> Mariangela
>> 
>> 
>> <DIS2024_Bondi.pdf>
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