[Clas12_high_luminosity] [EXTERNAL] Talk on the clas12 luminosity upgrade

[Rafayel Paremuzyan]

Hell Mariangela,

thanks for sharing your slides.
I agree with previous comments.

I will add just two minor comments.

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Slide 11. under uRwell features, will be probably better to add "Lower material budget"
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Slide 20, summary slide: you mention  "uCLAS12 is one of only two facilities..." , but I didn't see mention about the other one in the presentation, I assume you meant SOLID. so probably it will be good to mention SOLD somewhere in your presentation (or just in summary)

Rafo
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Subject: Re: [Clas12_high_luminosity] [EXTERNAL] Talk on the clas12 luminosity upgrade

Hi Mariangela,
It looks like a nice presentation except that many of your graphics are of poor quality, especially fuzzy drawings and in part also fuzzy text. Many of the graphs you use exist in  much better quality.

A few specific suggestions:

sl 1: CLAS12 collaboration is not an official title. It is CLAS collaboration.
sl 2: Imax = 90mA, mA is usually used for milli Amps, but the limit is micro Amps.
sl 6: Is it really 3188 PAC days? At best we have 30 weeks of accelerator running per year, i.e. 15 PAC weeks or 105 PAC days. The 3188 PAC days of running requires 30.4 years of machine operation, bring us to the year 2048.
sl 8: On bullet 2 in  Phase 1 you have (TCS, J/y production, should be J/psi).

I don't know when is your talk, but I suggest to put an effort into improving the quality of the slides.
Remember, you are speaking for a large international collaboration and for JLAB.

Best regards,
Volker




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Subject: [Clas12_high_luminosity] [EXTERNAL] Talk on the clas12 luminosity upgrade

Dear all,

Next week I will give a talk at DIS2024 titled: the clas12 luminosity upgrade and future physics opportunities. I m writing to share with you my presentation in order to have your feedback.
Attached you can find my slides. Let me know if you have any comments / corrections / suggestions.

Thanks a lot in advance !

Best regards,
Mariangela


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