[Clas_cascades] Updated paper

[Hovanes Egiyan]

Hi Elton,

thanks for the modifications about target selection.
Regarding the target in the abstract, the deuteron was not
mentioned in the abstract in the version that the committee reviewed.
I added it to the title and abstract last week.

Hovanes.


On 02/12/2011 11:13 AM, Elton Smith wrote:
> Hi Hovanes,
>
> I have merged the last three paragraphs of the introduction into one;
> moved the last sentence to spearhead. Hopefully this will address most
> of the concerns of the committee. I have checked this back into the
> repository after starting with the latest version. I assume no other
> changes were made during this brief time.
>
> On the suggestion of stating that we are using a neutron target in the
> abstract, I'm not sure we need to do this. The first sentence states
> that we use deuterium, and in fact experimentally that is all we can say
> anyway. I do not think it is a large jump for the audience to think that
> deuterium is being used because it has a neutron. (It would be unlikely
> that we use deuterium to study reactions off the proton). However, this
> can be discussed in a broader group.
>
> Cheers, Elton.
>