[Clas_hadron] One more thing about the NSTAR Talk for Hanretty

[burkert]

Hi Charles,

Thank you for sending me the slides. I went through them rather quickly, 
and I agree with you that you probably get through the 59 slides in some 
20 minutes(you have 17min) . From the 59 slides 25 (26 to 51) should be 
run as a short (<20sec) movie. I suggest you explain only the first 
slide and automatically in power point skip to the following slides 
after displaying each for 0.5 sec (or even 0.3sec). This will give a 
good impression to the audience about the kinematic reach and the 
statistical accuracy of this great set of polarization data.

Some of your overlays are not needed to be shown as overlay. For example 
the 3 slides 4-6 could be simply shown as 2 separate slides as you show 
slide 4 again as slide 6. Similarly, slides 9, 10 could be shown as a 
single slide if you incorporate the info on the blue insert in somewhat 
reduced fonts on slide. There is some info in the blue box that is not 
needed.  Just give the info related to your data (e.g. the 38.34 M 
2-pion events).

The 5 slides 11-15 may be combined to 2 or 3 slide. The yellow box is 
not needed as this should be part of your motivation.

Slide 17 you could skip, as these are details interesting for the CLAS 
working group but not for a conference talk.

Slide 21 has plots that will only confuse people unless you explain a 
lot so people understand what looks like very rugged data points without 
acceptance corrections.

slide 22  This is probably an overlay to the previous set of plots on 
slide 21.  The graphs are not self explanatory. I presume you have a 
good reason why you show them this way. If not, drop it.

slide 24 and 25 look identical to me.

Slide 26-51 is your short movie - good!

slide 52-55 I am not sure what people will take away from the mass 
dependence of I^c. for different phi bins. They need some explanations. 
Perhaps there is something in W. Roberts paper that you could use and 
add to slide 52 and 54 as motivation.

All the best,
Volker



  On 5/13/11 8:55 AM, Charles Hanretty wrote:
> Hello all,
>      I should have explained in my earlier email that many of my 
> slides build on each other so, for example, what is technically 4 
> slides really amounts to one slide. Furthermore, the preliminary 
> results I show (with the exception of 2 slides) will appear as an 
> animation showing the observable measurements for the E_{gamma} bins 
> ranging from 1.1 to 1.7 GeV. This is why there are so many slides in 
> my talk. Still, comments are welcome and I will make sure to not have 
> a long-winded or rapid-fire talk.
>
> -- 
> Cheers,
> Charles Hanretty
>
>
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