[Clas_hadron] dnp presentation

[Reinhard Schumacher]

Hello Chandra,

	As others have pointed out, definitely put "Preliminary" on the Results 
slides.  Also, give credit where credit is due: on Slide 21 put the 
reference to the CLAS paper for the recent Sigma0 results.

	Also, never promise more than you can deliver:  in this case you 
mention something about QGP in the motivation slides, building the 
audience's expectation about that topic.  In fact, you have nothing to 
say about it at the end.  Thus, you should take that out.

	Also, as has been pointed out, Point 3 on your conclusions slide is not 
true.  Take it out.

Regards,
Reinhard


> Dear all,
>>
>>
>> I will be giving a talk at DNP meeting on Oct 28th. The talk is
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> http://wwwold.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/hadron/presentations/2011/dnp2011_cha
>> ndra.pdf . Sorry it is late. Please send me your comment and suggestion.
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Chandra
>>
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