[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Shrunken particles pass freely through nuclear matter

[Kawtar Hafidi]

Thanks Larry. We'll do.

All the best,

Kawtar

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On Tue, Jul 19, 2011 at 3:20 PM, Lawrence Weinstein <weinstei at jlab.org>wrote:

> This version of the paper is much improved and I have only minor editing
> comments.
>
> p2, l3: replace 'yielding the disappearance' with 'cancelling'
> l5: define 'high momentum transfer' and give an example for how momentum is
> transferred.
> l9: add 'the' before 'struck'
> l10: add 'transferred' before 'momentum'
>
> par2, l2: delete 'the' before 'momentum'
> l14: delete 'would' after 'anti-quark'
> l17: replace 'in the time it takes to evolve' with 'before evolving'
> l18: replace 'nuclei' with 'the nucleus'.  Each hadron only interacts in
> one nucleus.
> l4 from end of para: delete 'as' before 'it is'.  Also, the phrase 'it is a
> necessary ... data' is very weak, vague and imprecise.  Please try to
> improve it.
> l3 from end: remove 'the' before and 'effect' after 'color transparency'
>
> par3, l1: add 'A' before 'few'
> l2: replace 'the proton' with 'proton knockout'
> l3: replace 'mesons' with 'meson production'
>
> p3, l3: replace 'higher' with 'greater'
> l4: replace 'used' with 'studied'
>
> p3,par1, l5: replace with 'small transverse separation, $r \propto 1/Q$'
> l9: replace 'will' with 'should'
>
> par3, l1: add 'the' before 'nuclear'
>
> p4,par1, l2-4: This is a very awkward sentence.  perhaps a replacement
> could be 'The increase ... requires that the q-qbar pair propagates far
> enough as an SSC before evolving into a normal hadron that the reduction in
> the nuclear interaction is observable.'
> l9-6 from end of para: This sentence is awkward.  Please rephrase.
> l5 from end of para: the apostrophe in "rho^0's" is a superscript.
>
>
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