[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Beam Spin Asymmetries in Semi-Inclusive pi0 production

David Ireland d.ireland at physics.gla.ac.uk
Thu May 12 04:28:29 EDT 2011


Dear Mher et al,

I have just one minor comment on the text:

Sentence on line 51, beginning "Many different observables...": you may want to change "are currently available from experiments: (list of experiments)" to something like "are currently available from experiments such as: (list of experiments)", otherwise it sounds like you should be listing observables, rather than experiments.

I like your use of the line-numbering style file. It makes comments on specific text very easy. Perhaps we should suggest this for all draft papers.

Best wishes,

Dave


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