[Clascomment] OPT-IN:Measurement of Exclusive pi0 Electroproduction Structure Functions and their Relationship to Transversity GPDs
David Ireland
David.Ireland at glasgow.ac.uk
Wed May 9 07:01:29 EDT 2012
Dear Ivan, et al.,
This is a very nice letter. There are just a couple of issues to consider:
* page 2, lines 3-4: The last sentence of the paragraph does not seem to me to fit in with what has just been written. Maybe a new, short paragraph is necessary.
* page 2, lines 29-30: The sentence should read something like "Thus E_T is a most interesting quantity, which we would like to access."
* page 4, figure 2: the data points need to be labelled in a legend, or preferably in the caption.
*page 4, lines 33-34: Please replace "U.K. Engineering and Physical Science Research Council" with "UK Science and Technology Facilities Council (STFC)"
Best wishes,
Dave
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